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Post by iloveroleplaying on Aug 27, 2016 16:28:40 GMT -9
once upon a time there was an eevee who loved to snowboard. he was so good at snowboarding that no one in his class could beat him at it. he always got A's and B's. So one day he decided to enter a snowboarding competition so he did and won a lot of gold medals. The End.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 27, 2016 19:07:21 GMT -9
Ah, you have roughly none of the elements of a story: Main Character--Check Any other charcters--X Setting--X Conflict--X Me Critiquing something meaningful instead of attacking three sentences that were obviously written as a joke--X
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Post by biddyFox on Aug 27, 2016 21:06:59 GMT -9
under, you are a motherfucking genius
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Post by Payne on Aug 29, 2016 10:40:39 GMT -9
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